She walked in the house and ran up the stairs. She did not want to deal with her parents. She did not want to answer questions about her whereabouts, if she’d seen Bob. She just wanted to be alone.
She walked in her room and stopped.
Something was wrong. Her bed was slightly askew, as if someone had moved it. She looked around and could see everything was slightly out-of-place. Her jewelry, her money had not been touched, so not a robbery. She must be going crazy. Paranoid.
Perhaps.
She raced to the bed, and reached her hand under. She moved it back and forth, searching. Desperately grasping. She kneeled down further, so she could see.
There was nothing.
It was all gone.
The pictures of her and Bob, the gifts he gave her.
Her journal, private thoughts no one had the right to read.
Stolen.
Her privacy.
Stolen.
Her trust.
Stolen.
Leaving only a message cruelly imprinted in her brain – trust no one.
This post is my first real attempt to join in at The Red Dress Club.
The prompt was: Someone has stolen something from you (or your character). Something of tremendous value. What will you do to get it back? Or will you give up?
Please let me know what you think, improvements that could be made, etc. I’m not sure if I’m 100% in love with it, but I wanted to post anyways, because if I wait till something’s perfect, I might never join in, haha. :) So, I would love any and all constructive criticism.